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[The Excursion - Part II]

That is such a sick name; I can't even comprehend that combination of words in my head. Very cool. The many different backgrounds, there is a prevalent theme of the lead characters being female in your movies. Her being restrained to the pentagram, is a good powerful scene. I appreciate that there is this emotional scene of crying, from the mom. The daughter reacting embarrassed. It's good to have the plot go through different emotions and have them be expressed. I would say it's an amazing technique for driving engagement and communicating to the audience. The plot builds rapport with the characters through expressing emotional elements that can be understood by the audience.

Many unique scenes and frames are well appreciated. Good choice of ambiance. I would say that the screen is way too loud, though that could be my own personal preference. A lot of effort was put into really hammering in that the scene is scary, and the subtle effect of cracks around the door really emphasized how terrifying that situation is.

[Like Overseer, Like Subordinate]

The robot designs are well-exaggerated with the multitude of guns, flame throwers, and rockets. The white stickman drawing with the Halo strikes me with interest. The backgrounds feel like a juxtaposition between the hand-drawn robot and the straight backgrounds.

Let's be honest, they're not wrong about mankind. It's not completely off. I would say genocide is quite rude, and it's not something I would recommend anyone embarking upon.

Even if they are a robot!

A recurring design! I also notice the turquoise-headed girl with, I would say, robot-like headphones, or it might be a bit of her hair. Although she doesn't have pink eyes! That character reminds me of a female character with scars on her head who is going to be featured again in some form in another design of yours. So, it's interesting to see the designs being a recurring theme. I'm interested to know if they represent something specific.

Many of the characters are depicted in uniforms, school attire, and suits for men, which are a big theme. Additionally, many of your movies are set in a city, and the ambiance emphasizes this urban environment where the stories take place.

Text is prominently featured as a vehicle for comedic delivery. "Help, help! I'm being oppressed. Hire a lawyer and cheat the system!" I enjoy your comedy being presented as it gives a lot of life and personality to your movies.

You made this for Robot Day hosted by MindChamber. I wonder how your process was for writing the dialogue and where the inspiration or incentive for this came from. It reminds me a bit of Africa Dudes with the dialogue between two characters being the focus, and the camera zooming in. I do appreciate that little flame, and the way when he speaks, the red dot reflects the speech is a good touch.

My experience with your animation is quite positive. The monologue was interesting, and the pun of the female robot saying, "I never processed it that way," I find to be quite funny due to the contrasting position of the speech on the destruction of humanity and how they are the architects of their own doom.

[Finding Your Way Home]

I didn't expect that voice; it was quite rude of him not to help her find her way to the third Circle of Hell.

The "monster" design is well done, with a unique silhouette, stitching, blood, and fangs that give it an otherworldly appearance indicative of the girl's home world. Just trying to find her way home but rejected due to her appearance, she is very powerful because of her ability to cry and cause damage to her surroundings.

This is simply my reading of your animation and creations, a big theme I see is the juxtaposition between safety and danger. Cute and horror.

[The Excursion]

The voice acting, I assume, is done by you, and you can hear the very Australian accent. Gives a lot of charm and personality which is extremely welcome! The animation now has dynamic lighting and a higher focus on plot and storytelling, with many different scenes and unique backgrounds setting the tonal atmosphere. Sound effects being louder than the voices, and I assume this was intentional because she is speaking quietly and the sounds in the world are obviously louder than her voice.

Then the school teacher got cursed. This is a more subtle, subtle horror-based punchline. I would say this is really welcome in the variation of the comedy and comedic styling you are presenting.

[Crush]

I am beginning to notice a theme in your animations, ending in violence. You are really good at setting up the expectation that it will end normally and friendly, but then all of a sudden, she turns out to be a monster and kills the guy. I guess that's her way of showing she likes him. Unlucky guy.

The sound editing, I feel, was well done. The footsteps and background ambience are good; they are in sync with your animation.

[Making New Friends]

Cute, fun scene! I would say I feel quite special. Yes, I do feel special because I am retarded, but that's beside the point. It's cute, it's fun, light-hearted, and wholesome. Oh no, I actually did not expect that the cat would be executed. What a shocking punchline!

I feel that the way the eye pops out and the speed of the hammer hitting the cat's head were very shocking. It induces a response from the audience, which I feel is unexpected.

Your beginning was so friendly and nice!

[Pantsu]

The music is fun and sets the atmosphere of the environment. I feel the characters are supposed to parody the anime style by exaggerating the features and communicating the comedic atmosphere. The use of stock laughing sound effects adds a lot, and the fast movements of the camera are good. The way Merisa's hand indicates attention from Shizuka, and the subtle motions of the panties on the head of Shizuka seem to indicate that she does not understand that her wardrobe is inappropriate for the public, and this is being pointed out to her, yet she simply does not understand it.

I would say that having the characters communicate the scene through action is a great engaging. It's a big shock how the resolution is solved through violence, and I think the punchline is well executed. The scene where she hits the stop sign for the bus is good, and the blood adds a lot. Additionally, the execution of the gun finishing is impactful.

[Kidney Comic Collab]

I apologize if this is annoying, but I am going to provide review commentary for all of your movies. While it may not offer a lot of input, I believe the feedback I can provide can be valuable. I'll share my experience and what I think about your animation.

Please let me know if you find this annoying or if you think it's an okay idea.

@ChillyBite, of course just the usual! Nice animation!

Flash has very distinct markings. What I find funny is that the man with the brown tie, the coffee smoke, is almost still; it moves very slowly. It's a very interesting effect. The way that the bear with the monocle and the man with the top hat riding the bear and the rainbow shooting out of the rocket and going out into space, I think that's interesting!

A great strength lies in the charm of the style, which is very indicative and remarked of that era. There's a great deal of charisma in how the pacing is set; it is fast and communicates the punchline quickly. I feel this is a great strength.

[Don't give her that stone!]

WOW, WOW, WOW! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING, SUPREMELY AWESOME ANIMATION!

[Grim Friends]

Henry, Harry, and Hoody got me laughing cuz are relatable.